The city may have been dark but within the city there was the feel of light happiness flowing through everyones heart. Above the city was a yellow light reminding everyone there is a sun beyond the thick grey clouds dispersed from the abandoned factory. Around the city was the dark water slamming rapidly at the city leaving mold and rotted walls disintegrating into the smallest pieces, polluting the unholy water. Above the city was the most unrecognisable to any man, it is lifeless just flying stealing tiny bits of food not even being eaten just taken somewhere where man may not try dare travel to.Under the enchanted castle was the forgotten shaft,no had been there since the year 1890 what ever is there is long forgotten but whatever is still down there is troubling the castle the last source of life.Inside the factory was the steam engines is the last power source if we lost that the darkness city will fall and pure madness and evil will control the earth destroying anyone that will stand for the light of this castle.The area was being cunseumed by the most evil powered beasts with no heart just full off death and hatered,it never will give u mercy just murder.everyone feared the beast but only a couple of people have ever seen the beast transform into something so unimaginable.

March 18, 2015 at 9:24 pm
Such an interesting and compelling note of optimism in this description, Alex. Have another look at your last sentence as I think there’s a bit of an issue with a missing subject…